Jesse Hunter
Mrs. Fraser
Creative Writing
September 11, 2015
Lost
The men were in dark, British
uniforms and on tall, dark horses. As they approached our front door they told
my family to leave the room. They quickly hopped off of the horses and began
coming closer in an almost pattern like movement. One of them, who seemed to be
their leader looked at me with his cold grey eyes and said, “they’re coming,
run.’\
I
immediately ran back into my house where I found that my family was nowhere to
be seen. I looked outside and noticed the dark men were gone. I quickly grabbed
my 9mm from my nightstand drawer and stood there in silence for several minutes. My mind was racing at lightning speed with unending possibilities of
what those men could’ve meant and where the hell my family was.
I
decided to leave the house and began walking towards the old church that has
been closed for many years. As I neared the old church I saw a dark silhouette
standing underneath a massive oak tree in the church courtyard. I started
walking towards this figure almost as if I was being drawled in. Eventually I
was just a few steps from this featureless figure. As I looked into his deep
grey eyes my body collapsed and my mind began going down a bottomless tunnel of
questions that I could not answer. I tried to swim but the push of water kept
me from saving myself.
I am intrigued by this scene and think you could develop this into a longer story. Interesting!
ReplyDelete