Jesse Hunter
Mrs. Fraser
Creative Writing
September 9th, 2015
The
old, grey-haired man woke up to another gloomy, lonely day.
As he gazed out his condo
window at the ocean, slowly floating by, he realized that he longed to be like
the ocean. Slowly through life calm, and worry free. Reflecting something
great, like the infinite blue sky.
When he was young he often dreamed of being a pilot. He
loved the excitement and somewhat risk that it brought. He never wanted to be
in the same place for too long. The old man would always dream about being up
in the cozy, fluffy, clouds where he thought he might find peace. He would
search for that peace his all life, now it seems that life is getting more grey
than the hair that remains on his head.
At one point the old man became restless, nothing he was
doing was bringing him any happiness or peace. His life had become an everyday
trail. He would visit his wife Charlene’s grave every Tuesday with her favorite
roses. Tuesdays were very hard for him, sometimes he would get angry with
himself, but he always had to remind himself what his wife would’ve wanted him
to be doing. But all the man could think about was the way she looked in that
red dress a few days before she passed.
One day as the old grey-haired man was walking along the
beach on a cool Sunday night, he decided to just sit down and watch the ocean
again. He began to realize that most of everything in life is just temporary,
even his own life. And when he understood that, he got up immediately and began
screaming and crying “What have I been doing all these years!” He quickly
headed back to his car and drove home without saying a word. The man had found
peace, not just peace, but his own peace. He was simply okay with whatever
happened from there on out, he wasn’t worried about any material things or
temporary things, cause his life was so black and barren. The old man said to
himself “It’s time I start painting my own life.”
What a wonderful line: "now it seems that life is getting more grey than the hair that remains on his head." I also like the thought of him remembering Charlene in her red dress. So sweet.
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