-Jesse
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Samantha
“Just be you”
I really
liked how you related a couple of them to yourself and your family. Everybody
can be clumsy sometimes haha. I can relate to looking for adventure because
I've been doing that my whole life, and it doesn't always end up how I would
like it to, but I don't regret anything because it’s what made me, me. So no
matter how old you get never stop looking for that adventure because I promise
one day you will find it.
Emma “Simple
youth”
I really enjoyed reading this, I liked what you had the two
kids say to each other in a note, you can tell it was well thought out. I also
like how you had the big brother roll to solve the argument between them,
thanks for the read! :)
Emma: I really liked reading these little short stories, it
may be weird but I like how your mind works, those stories were well thought
out and put together. You're writing is very visual and I like that, keep up
the good work!
Emma : Haha, This made me laugh a little, I like
it a lot though, keep up the good work!:P
Daniel : Seems like a pretty good read, I like what
you had to say about the book, really good description.
Summary: I personally found Emma's blog the most interesting. I liked how she used her words and how abstract her work was. I liked the post "Simple Youth" a lot, it brought me back to my childhood when I would get in stupid arguments with my sibling and our dad would have to come break us up and sometimes even made us write a note to each other.
Summary: I liked Daniels blog because, Kermit. Everytime I visit his page I get a little laugh, his post about the book was very descriptive and really drew me in to wanting to read that book.
Summary: Samantha's writings were pretty great, you can tell she puts in a lot of work and thought into her pieces. Some were funny, some serious, but all of them were well put together and made me think, which is hard to do sometimes lol so good job!
Thanks for being a friendly reader for your classmates! I know they appreciate the encouragement.
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