For my fellow classmates.

Jesse

Summary: I read some very good well thought out stories to read today. It took me on a little journey through part of their life, or even some of their family’s’ lives. It was enjoyable and also nice to know a little bit more about them. So to my peers Madeline, Riley, and Taylor, good job! I really liked each of your stories, thank you for sharing them with me.

Comments: I really liked how you shared a story that means something to you, I can really tell that you enjoyed writing this, maybe haha. 
Definitely a good read and made me feel a little happier reading it also, thanks for sharing.

I agree with both of the girls above also, I can tell you put a lot of emotion into it and really tried to explain how it felt for your mom and for your grandpa, I enjoyed reading your story, thanks for sharing!

I really enjoyed reading your story, I can tell you put a lot of thought into it and it is well put together. Definitely was exciting to read, I liked how descriptive you were about the place and feelings it brought out, it made me feel like I was there in the crowd or something.